Faleshia Murphy Poet Nonet

Wish I Could Go Back

Never use to like wearing glasses
Every since I was a child
Now I regret each momment
Wish I could take it back
It would help me
To change my
Unhappy
And sad
Life

If I could go back into time
I'll care more about my eyes
Visit the doctor often
Take better care of me
My vision is what
Should have meant
The world 
To me 
Pray

Lesson well taught and well learned
Make sure you take care of yourself
Before it is to late
Relieve yourself of pain
Enjoy your life
Live it healthy
You only
Have but
One




FOR A JOURNEY BACK INTO 
TIME CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 7, 2011 at 10:31 AM Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Faleshia. I miss you so much. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2010 at 9:17 PM HI, Faleshia. How are you doing? Congratulations on your win. I remember this enjoyable poem. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts October 6, 2010 at 11:55 AM wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest

John Freeman October 5, 2010 at 5:48 PM Faleshia Congratulations on your worthy poem's win in the top 10. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta October 5, 2010 at 12:31 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win, faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2010 at 11:48 AM Congratulations Faleshia on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2010 at 9:31 AM Congrats Faleshia on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry .. appreciate your constant support always with luv...

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2010 at 10:48 PM Faleshia, you couldn't have changed your eyesight even by seeing a doctor. I am sure you took care of yourself ok. You have a dear spirit. That is what counts! Nice poem on your feelings, Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

Gert W. Knop October 1, 2010 at 4:06 PM Great poem to go back in time, Faleshia! I am wearing glasses since the age of 16. Nearly lost my left eye when I was a kid when falling onto a sharp stone. I could never wear contact lenses. Have a great time and I wish you best of luck in all contests!...Gert:)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet September 30, 2010 at 4:08 PM Love it Faleshia. Things we realise we have done wrong in the past. yet we still plod alone doing it all over again.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 28, 2010 at 5:20 PM Lovely Faleshia.. need two more verses of Nonet to qualify for competition in my contest luv.. enjoyed this first verse...

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2010 at 5:02 PM Very nice entry in the contest , Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick September 28, 2010 at 1:25 PM Good luck in this contest with this prayer request for better vision..Reads like a winner.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2010 at 1:20 PM Very nice entry to the contest of Linda, faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire September 28, 2010 at 12:47 PM Faleshia, I'm sorry to hear you're having problems with your eyesight. Taking care of health issues is one thing many people would do if they could "Journey Back into Time." I was moved by your plight and will surely pray for you. Thanks for your comments today. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico September 28, 2010 at 11:05 AM This is a great entry and should do real well in the contest...best of luck Michael

Poet Destroyer A September 28, 2010 at 10:54 AM The best of luck in the contest, Faleshia a nice reason to go back in time. I myself have bad vision, but mine is from all them tears that force-ively made me rub my eyes. How I wish to go back and see it was not worth the eye rub. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.