Wish

Holding onto a dream without a face Paralyzed in limbo, not here or there Following a road that leads no place Where are you , please leave a trace I'm overwhelmed by things to share Holding onto a dream without a face Desiring only to have my little space Existing happily only one single care Following a road that leads no place Wanting once to not end in disgrace Taking this for granted I do not dare Holding onto a dream without a face I don't understand this, I have no base Sorry, I don't know how I can prepare Following a road that leads no place Fatigued in this never ending rat race Ultimate failure, I'm not able to bear Holding onto a dream without a face Following a road that leads no place by Wayland Bunch

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Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/24/2013 10:38:00 AM

it's a nice poem! ...may all your Wishes come true :') ...happiness and love..^_^

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/13/2013 4:25:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem and congrats, wayland

Judy Konos

Date: 12/12/2013 12:38:00 PM

All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2013 3:05:00 PM

"Holding onto a dream without a face" << I can very much relate to that! This is a very good villanelle (and a hard form to write in). We all desire to chase something. So much so that we end up just running and running, having no idea where we are going... Keep writing, my friend! I enjoy reading your posts :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2013 5:48:00 AM

Good morning Wayland, your poem is deep.it was almost like walking in a trance with my eyes open wide. Without knowing or emotions. After reading your poem, I think its better to hold on to a dream, then just letting it go. Wishings an element I would not withdrawal from. I hope this rode you follow, unveils the shadows around your dream....xox..pd

Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/13/2013 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much for your comment again. I think because of you every one and myself, everyone of my poems has a comment lol. Thanks again for the inspiration and kind words.