Wish

Whispering heartache unfolds in torture
Incisions decorate the outside of you
See the river of lost hope unfold in a pond of red
How many will know you are dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 9:16 AM
awesome acrostic...a great read for sure!!
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 5:41 AM
A very well written poem, Rebecca. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Dark & deep. Powerfully done!
Deeks Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Thought provoking piece.... great flow, tyvm karen
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October 16, 2012 at 10:47 PM
Oooh. Chilling read. Always, Laura
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