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Whispering heartache unfolds in torture Incisions decorate the outside of you See the river of lost hope unfold in a pond of red How many will know you are dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/25/2012 9:16:00 AM
awesome acrostic...a great read for sure!!
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Date: 10/21/2012 5:41:00 AM
A very well written poem, Rebecca. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
Dark & deep. Powerfully done!
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Date: 10/17/2012 1:32:00 AM
Thought provoking piece.... great flow, tyvm karen
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Date: 10/16/2012 10:47:00 PM
Oooh. Chilling read. Always, Laura
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