Wish

A wish is a want
I want the stars in my yard
My rose filled garden 

Lush and brimming with
Fresh blossoms  in view seduction
Every solitary time

Open a window
Or gaze dote on stars you wish
On through the clear pane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:49 PM
A wish should always be done looking out a window! Love the imagery.
Raynes Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:48 PM
stars in your garden, what a beautiful metaphor, sounds like ur garden is amazing :)
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Thanks for reading and thanks for the critique Lewis.
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