Wisdom's Hide and Seek

There is simplicity inside the eye that opens oh so wide to pain
Then closes to release the grain and rest the mind to hide again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 8:35 PM
VERY interesting one, Deb, and I see you got fifth?? GREAT job. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on the 5th place win
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations, Deb. Well deserved win with these insightful eyes...and lots of wisdom. Love, Dane Ann
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 3:55 PM
How beautifully written. Loved this very philosophical piece. Have a great day! Scarlett
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form.. enjoy another biggie..TEACH.. with luv .pupil..
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:47 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Deb. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Well said, Deborah. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 12:57 AM
Deborah, congratulations on your place in my contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 7:39 PM
A nice thought provoking couplet. Good luck in the contest.
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Hey I really like this one too! No wonder I LOVE reading your material. Have a great day dear! Scarlett
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Yes so true.. read them over to make sure I absorbed this message TEACH.. good luck in the contest.. with luv... effervescent pupil in LUV...
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