Winters Weapon

the harmony of the clouds
in the sky sing
the silent song of snow
half notes and whole notes
denoted in the air
while winds whistle
and whispers it's constant dare
eye's worship and stare
at the greatness of the shroud
hiding us from the moon
and stars
a frozen blanket stretches
so far
it equals the size of the sea
it speaks in the tongues of winter
cold, freezing and froze
contemporary names
for conditions under it's rule
the powers of the heavens
employ destruction
to those who do not fear
who have not shelter
and are not strong
whom time has scheduled
for an end
rocks break
mountains fall
the sun hath no protection 
for those whom winter covers
with it's shawl
it stands only to witness
the rules of winters regions
the extreme north and south
the white worlds
where solitude is inevitable
and nothing moves 
except the wind
to deliver it's stiffening potion
to liquid beings flowing with 
water and blood
the winter invades the south
with intentions of creating
a new ice age
but sand defends
the southern shores
time and time again
the silent song of the snow
eventually must end
giving in to the sun
to melt the weapons
of winters sin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/24/2012 1:15:00 PM
Winter can be a rough time ...We here in the south don't have it too bad but we do get some snow occasionally..My husband started sitting with me at church before I was old enough to date or at least my parents would not let me date..Then he did his active duty in the military..My parents wanted me to finish school but I got married before my last year.I went back after my youngest child started to school and went on to finish college..Masters now in Christian Ministry..Thanks for stopping by.SK
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Date: 3/2/2010 9:04:00 AM
Ouch it's cold here today. Makes a person think of the North and South Pole and thank God we have the sun. lol Phyl
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Date: 1/5/2010 4:45:00 PM
ya know, if all drinkers were like my brother, obnoxious when drunk, alcohol would be outlawed. LOL
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:08:00 PM
Good one!! enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 1/2/2010 3:22:00 PM
John iii, I hope you entered this narrative in the winter poem contest. If you didn't, you should. Burr! It's cold... But not as cold as Norway! Thank God above for the Sun and a well planned planetary rotation that gives us seasons to freeze and to please... summer fun! It's all in the good plan. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/31/2009 9:50:00 AM
Winter does indeed have a weapon and so do u! Have a happy new year!!!
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Date: 12/29/2009 12:17:00 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup John. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 12:12:00 PM
Quite spectacular write here, John !! I've often wondered what some of the 100 names the eskimos have for snow are ... smile ... wonderful writing here !!
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