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Winter's Vestment

Flakes cascade downward
  God's angels pillow fighting....
     Earth dons chilled feathers

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Eamon Duffin

January 5, 2011 at 7:28 AM

Hi John. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 5, 2011 at 5:19 AM

Congratulations John on your win in the "Strict Haiku 2" contest by Charles Henderson. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

January 4, 2011 at 8:05 PM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2011 at 6:07 PM

Congratulations, john!! Loved it the first time!

Eiken Laan

January 4, 2011 at 4:36 PM

John This is a beautiful haiku, congratulations on your win, stunning.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 4, 2011 at 4:35 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Charles, john

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 4, 2011 at 3:51 PM

Congrats John on your wonderful and well deserved win in the Haiku contest with such lovely words so expressive my friend.. enjoy another top ten success with luv..

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2011 at 2:38 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman

January 4, 2011 at 10:18 AM

Really awesome imagery John. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 4, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Very nice indeed, John. Congratulations on your win. May the pillow fights continue! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

January 4, 2011 at 7:56 AM

Who could not smile at this joyful and beautiful haiku !??? I would expect nothing less from you !! Congratulations John !! :)

Deb Radke

January 4, 2011 at 6:55 AM

Oh I like this. A vision of angels above playing with pillows. Very good. Congratulations.

Kash Poet

January 4, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Congratulations John on your well deserved win!

Charles Henderson

January 4, 2011 at 6:16 AM

John, congrats on your win in my contest. This poem certainly deserved it. Charles

Iolanda Scripca

December 1, 2010 at 9:16 PM

What an original, artistic expression of winter. Just beautiful, dear John. I love it! iolanda

Andrea Dietrich

December 1, 2010 at 9:10 PM

JOhn, I love reading all the haiku here tonight and here is one of the best for awesome images: God's angels pillow fighting! so cool. Luv, Andrea

Skat A

December 1, 2010 at 9:03 PM

John, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 1, 2010 at 8:56 PM

Congrats John on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv..and happy holidays to u..

Francine Roberts

July 24, 2010 at 8:02 AM

beautiful haiku, congrats on it being featured this week

Sara Kendrick

July 24, 2010 at 7:16 AM

Congratulations on your poem getting homepage feature...Great write that I could just see and feel the scene even though I live in the south where we get very little snow....Good job..Sara

Adeleke Adeite

July 19, 2010 at 11:04 AM

Congrats John on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 19, 2010 at 5:12 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 18, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Congrats John on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a brilliant piece to share with us all.. with luv..

Janette Fisher

July 18, 2010 at 6:54 AM

Many congrats on your third feature this week - a wonderful haiku - you are a true master of the art of poetry. Rgds Jan

Katherine Stella

May 30, 2010 at 10:17 AM

Congrats John on this being posted but when did ya write it lol for soup seems to post things years later like they did mine lol loved the imagery but so glad summer is here hope all is well in the music bsn with ya

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