Winter's Transition

Leaves changing color
From green to scarlet and gold
Winter’s transition

 ~FALL~

~3rd Place in the "SEASONS SENRYU" Contest by Linda-Marie Bariana~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/21/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Tirzah. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:56:00 PM
Wonderful perception of the Fall season. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:21:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on placing third in Linda-Marie's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:25:00 AM
a colorful factual one! Congratulations, Tirzah!
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:53:00 AM
lovely verse! Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2010 12:11:00 PM
Thank You so much for the win "Sweetheart"! I had a lot of fun with this contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:45:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your success in my contest.. this was a most creative write for an entry.. thankxxx for supporting my contests.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Debbie I couldn't get it to center so I just moved it all the way to the left. I will get to writing on the catch phrase you gave me-Thank you for the opportunity. Linda-Marie thanks for the heads up!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:44:00 PM
Your assignment should you chose to accept it is Catch Phrase STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF! ( if you put a . in front of Leaves you can push it over where you want it to be ;)
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Date: 6/13/2010 1:34:00 PM
Tirzah.. send Debbie Guzzi a Soup Mail for your Catch Phrase so u will get into the contest..she may not go back and check the blogs before the contest fills up.. hope u don't mind my putting my two cents in..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:26:00 AM
SOUP MAIL Tirzah... with luv...
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Date: 6/12/2010 10:29:00 PM
nice imagery on the season change, got a good view of the leaves changing with the season, enjoyed, have yourself a nice one,..p..d
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