Winter's Transition

Leaves changing color
From green to scarlet and gold
Winter’s transition

 ~FALL~

~3rd Place in the "SEASONS SENRYU" Contest by Linda-Marie Bariana~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Tirzah. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 8:56 PM
Wonderful perception of the Fall season. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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June 19, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on placing third in Linda-Marie's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:25 AM
a colorful factual one! Congratulations, Tirzah!
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 4:53 AM
lovely verse! Light & Love
Conway Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Thank You so much for the win "Sweetheart"! I had a lot of fun with this contest!~Tirzah~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your success in my contest.. this was a most creative write for an entry.. thankxxx for supporting my contests.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
Conway Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Debbie I couldn't get it to center so I just moved it all the way to the left. I will get to writing on the catch phrase you gave me-Thank you for the opportunity. Linda-Marie thanks for the heads up!~Tirzah~
Guzzi Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Your assignment should you chose to accept it is Catch Phrase STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF! ( if you put a . in front of Leaves you can push it over where you want it to be ;)
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June 13, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Tirzah.. send Debbie Guzzi a Soup Mail for your Catch Phrase so u will get into the contest..she may not go back and check the blogs before the contest fills up.. hope u don't mind my putting my two cents in..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:26 AM
SOUP MAIL Tirzah... with luv...
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June 12, 2010 at 10:29 PM
nice imagery on the season change, got a good view of the leaves changing with the season, enjoyed, have yourself a nice one,..p..d
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