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Winters Sun

while winter weeks warmth 
wondrous weeping willows wilt 
wrens whistle wildly 

spring season soon starts 
sunflower seeds sprout slowly 
sparrows sing softly 


Spring Haiku Contest 
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 
3/1/2019

springhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2019 8:30:00 PM

Hello Charlie Messina, this is a lovely spring poem. It is so nice to see everything come to life. I enjoy the Dove's song every morning. have a nice evening my friend.

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/29/2019 12:29:00 PM

Very creative play on words and also an uplifting image feast of Spring's beautiful gifts!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/28/2019 1:27:00 PM

This is great Charlie. Haiku with a twist. Congratulations on your win.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/10/2019 12:55:00 PM

There is plenty of impact with the haiku and the alliterative magic takes it to a whole new level. Into my FAVs and of course it is a winner. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2019 4:55:00 PM

I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/3/2019 10:01:00 PM

Excellent Alliteration. CONGRATS to win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2019 2:12:00 PM

great alliteration, charles! Very spring . Congrats on the win.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2019 12:19:00 PM

wow Charles two sensational haiku with wonderful alliteration:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/3/2019 11:12:00 AM

Pleased to return with congratulations on your high placing, Charlie. Well done! Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 3/3/2019 9:59:00 AM

Great one Charles!...Congrats on your win..

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/3/2019 9:38:00 AM

Delightful Haiku Charlie, so many congrats on your top win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 3/3/2019 8:44:00 AM

Fabulous Haiku Chuck! Congrats.

Gary Smith

Date: 3/3/2019 8:26:00 AM

Excellent Charlie, congrats. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 3/3/2019 8:17:00 AM

Spectacular ink! Congratulations on your top win Charlie! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/3/2019 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Charles.

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, Line :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/3/2019 7:28:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2019 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:03:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/3/2019 6:38:00 AM

Beautiful work Charles, congratulations for your win...

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:03:00 AM

I really appreciate that, Charlie. Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2019 6:35:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise hugs // Charlie :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2019 6:05:00 AM

Lovely imagery Charlie Congrats. Tom.

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Tom.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2019 5:21:00 AM

This is gorgeous haiku and a favorite of mine, congratulations on your first place win!

Charles Messina
Date: 3/3/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania. So glad you liked it and I am truly humbled for the high placement in your lovely contest. Thank you also for making this a fave! Hugs // Charlie