Charles Messina Poet Haiku

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Winters Sun

while winter weeks warmth 
wondrous weeping willows wilt 
wrens whistle wildly 

spring season soon starts 
sunflower seeds sprout slowly 
sparrows sing softly 


Spring Haiku Contest 
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 
3/1/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2019 at 8:30 PM Hello Charlie Messina, this is a lovely spring poem. It is so nice to see everything come to life. I enjoy the Dove's song every morning. have a nice evening my friend.

Robert Lindley March 29, 2019 at 12:29 PM Very creative play on words and also an uplifting image feast of Spring's beautiful gifts!

Suzanne Delaney March 10, 2019 at 12:55 PM There is plenty of impact with the haiku and the alliterative magic takes it to a whole new level. Into my FAVs and of course it is a winner. SuZ

Sara Kendrick March 7, 2019 at 4:55 PM I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Anisha Dutta March 3, 2019 at 10:01 PM Excellent Alliteration. CONGRATS to win.

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2019 at 2:12 PM great alliteration, charles! Very spring . Congrats on the win.

Jan Allison March 3, 2019 at 12:19 PM wow Charles two sensational haiku with wonderful alliteration:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 3, 2019 at 11:12 AM Pleased to return with congratulations on your high placing, Charlie. Well done! Regards // paul

Joseph May March 3, 2019 at 9:59 AM Great one Charles!...Congrats on your win..

Ann Gilmour March 3, 2019 at 9:38 AM Delightful Haiku Charlie, so many congrats on your top win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charlie Knowlton March 3, 2019 at 8:44 AM Fabulous Haiku Chuck! Congrats.

Gary Smith March 3, 2019 at 8:26 AM Excellent Charlie, congrats. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 3, 2019 at 8:17 AM Spectacular ink! Congratulations on your top win Charlie! xomo

Line Gauthier March 3, 2019 at 7:52 AM Congrats on your top win, Charles. Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you, Line :)

Alexis Y. March 3, 2019 at 7:28 AM Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you, Alexis :)

Heidi Sands March 3, 2019 at 7:13 AM Congratulations for your win :) Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:03 AM Thank you, Heidi :)

Charlie Smith March 3, 2019 at 6:38 AM Beautiful work Charles, congratulations for your win... Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:03 AM I really appreciate that, Charlie. Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2019 at 6:35 AM - Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:04 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise hugs // Charlie :)

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2019 at 6:05 AM Lovely imagery Charlie Congrats. Tom. Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:04 AM Thank you, Tom.

Tania Kitchin March 3, 2019 at 5:21 AM This is gorgeous haiku and a favorite of mine, congratulations on your first place win! Charles Messina March 3, 2019 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much, Tania. So glad you liked it and I am truly humbled for the high placement in your lovely contest. Thank you also for making this a fave! Hugs // Charlie

Caren Krutsinger March 1, 2019 at 10:02 AM Your alliterative way of doing this whimsical and fun.

Line Gauthier March 1, 2019 at 9:16 AM A great play on words, Charles.

Lawrence Sharp March 1, 2019 at 7:49 AM Very well crafted, my friend, nice write.

Paul Callus March 1, 2019 at 7:29 AM You have provided us with lovely striking imagery and alliteration, Charlie! In some places spring arrives early!! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 6:54 AM The serenity of Spring after the long Winter night.