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while winter weeks warmth 
wondrous weeping willows wilt 
wrens whistle wildly 

spring season soon starts 
sunflower seeds sprout slowly 
sparrows sing softly 


Spring Haiku Contest 
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 
3/1/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/29/2019 8:30:00 PM
Hello Charlie Messina, this is a lovely spring poem. It is so nice to see everything come to life. I enjoy the Dove's song every morning. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Very creative play on words and also an uplifting image feast of Spring's beautiful gifts!
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Date: 3/28/2019 1:27:00 PM
This is great Charlie. Haiku with a twist. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2019 12:55:00 PM
There is plenty of impact with the haiku and the alliterative magic takes it to a whole new level. Into my FAVs and of course it is a winner. SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2019 4:55:00 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:01:00 PM
Excellent Alliteration. CONGRATS to win.
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Date: 3/3/2019 4:47:00 PM
Original and beautiful - love the alliteration - Congrats
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Date: 3/3/2019 2:12:00 PM
great alliteration, charles! Very spring . Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:19:00 PM
wow Charles two sensational haiku with wonderful alliteration:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2019 11:12:00 AM
Pleased to return with congratulations on your high placing, Charlie. Well done! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:59:00 AM
Great one Charles!...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:38:00 AM
Delightful Haiku Charlie, so many congrats on your top win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:44:00 AM
Fabulous Haiku Chuck! Congrats.
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:26:00 AM
Excellent Charlie, congrats. :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:17:00 AM
Spectacular ink! Congratulations on your top win Charlie! xomo
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Charles.
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Line :)
Date: 3/3/2019 7:28:00 AM
Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis :)
Date: 3/3/2019 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 3/3/2019 6:38:00 AM
Beautiful work Charles, congratulations for your win...
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:03:00 AM
I really appreciate that, Charlie. Thank you
Date: 3/3/2019 6:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise hugs // Charlie :)
Date: 3/3/2019 6:05:00 AM
Lovely imagery Charlie Congrats. Tom.
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Tom.
Date: 3/3/2019 5:21:00 AM
This is gorgeous haiku and a favorite of mine, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania. So glad you liked it and I am truly humbled for the high placement in your lovely contest. Thank you also for making this a fave! Hugs // Charlie
Date: 3/1/2019 10:02:00 AM
Your alliterative way of doing this whimsical and fun.
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:16:00 AM
A great play on words, Charles.
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Date: 3/1/2019 7:49:00 AM
Very well crafted, my friend, nice write.
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