Winters Stable Home-Tableau

Winter’s stable home,
with flurry of snow,
tied to bough - won’t break.
The winged couple’s content,
light cantata sweet,
their flautist - the wind.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:25 AM
What a sweet song of winter, Kim! Love your last line! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of a sweet "cantata" to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Thank you sweetly, dear friend!
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:49 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Thank you, my lovely friend!
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:49 AM
Brilliant; congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Thank you, Terry :)
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Such a sweet picture, Kim! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Lovely imagery Kim. Congreatulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, SV!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim. Brilliant choice of words!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Thank you, Mala!
Empress Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Wordplay here is brilliant. I absolutely love the creativeness of this write. Very well deserved win. Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Thank you IE!
May Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Lovely write Kim, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Hind Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:11 PM
So beautiful, Kim... I am looking at it with your eyes. It's magic.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much, Paige!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 8:11 AM
This poem deserves a painting of high quality. Loved the last line. Hope all is well at home. Your father is always in my thoughts. Hugs sweet friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Oh my! Thank you so much for asking! He is doing well. You too, dear friend, are always remembered! <3<3
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