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Winter's Skin

Winter spreads silver skin over lake blood,
weaving the shores together
in a smooth, crystal scab

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Painted Hunter

Date: 5/8/2013 12:54:00 PM

And I hope your new job is going well...Don't over-work yourself now. I know what that mental and physical exhaustion feels like for sure. Right around the first of August, I'll start working 7 days a week for 12-36 hours at a time, and won't have a day off until the end of November...if I post during that time, it's likely to be some weird stuff...ha

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/8/2013 12:50:00 PM

Hey, I guess I've missed this one...I like it a lot...How did this not make the winner's list? Did you not enter it?...The image is cold and bloody...I'll never look at ice the same way..haha...I'll just be thinking of tearing off that crystal scab..ha...ok that's kinda gross.

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/16/2013 4:41:00 AM

very good

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2013 11:20:00 PM

Sorry this one is not on the winners list. I had really liked it, Heather.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2013 2:17:00 PM

for sheer imagery,, this beat them all,,, wonderful poetry,,,

Kash Poet

Date: 1/30/2013 6:49:00 PM

Beautiful Imagery in this Kimo Heather.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2013 2:52:00 PM

Very descriptive and creative work describing winter..Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/30/2013 9:34:00 AM

A very good entry Hesther

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/29/2013 4:33:00 PM

Nicely done with good imagery, Heather, good luck in the contest:) Jag

Margherita Russo

Date: 1/29/2013 2:19:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet

Terry O'Leary

Date: 1/29/2013 12:38:00 PM

Kinda morbid... but kinda good (which 'kinda'? 'very', of course)... Terry (nice work)

Margherita Russo

Date: 1/29/2013 11:10:00 AM

Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/28/2013 7:24:00 PM

This is very good Heather! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a harmonious piece! You've painted a wonderful winter scene with this poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2013 7:22:00 PM

wow. Such imagery!!! I am interested why you chose "blood" for the lake? WEre you imagining a red sunset above it?

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