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winter's rain freezes

winter's rain freezes ice coats tall southern pine trees... pow trees snap like twigs
A memory from the winter of 1963/64 I was due with our first child..There was rain then snow then ice..It melted enough just in time for me to get to the hospital..

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Date: 2/16/2013 4:39:00 AM
love this wonderful
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:16:00 AM
love this, Sara - glad it melted in time!!
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:57:00 PM
oh, sara, this exactly what I was writing about in my winter halibun for Debs. This happened at my in-law's place in kentucky, the ice encased trees. Wow what an event to remember with the birth of your baby.
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Date: 2/12/2013 3:45:00 PM
I really like the sound effect you gave us with the word 'pow', its very imaginative and put the thought within my head! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an enlightening piece, a definite wondrous winter description, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/12/2013 1:41:00 PM
We have often such winter rain Sara, wet snow turning to rain and freezing at night. - Everything a glazed ice, the next day! -Then it's best to be indoors. - Nice poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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