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Just for fun and to feel in space when waiting and getting my warm moist heat before PT...Sara

Winter's Nigh

Winter is drawing closer~'tis nigh
The eaglets have flown the giant nest
Soon they'll fill the Cobalt blue sky
Each will search the lake for its quest
Build a nest upon the boulder
The problems of the world won't shoulder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 2:04 PM
BOy what the heck di I say down there LOL,,Sara check Schizms & Lapses see if it makes any more sense now, basically its just about the feeling of fear which comes with night and the fear which comes when we ponder our own sanity and our reactions to stress..THANKS
Johnson Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 7:10 AM
Winter is nigh. I want to cry. My bones, they are begging for summer. But fall is escaping, soon white will be draping. And winter won't seem such a bummer.
Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:09 PM
soft smile..even we shoulded shoulder all that..perhaps line 4[on its quest] Light & Love
Sivey Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Great write Sara! I always enjoy the cobalt blue sky, such a beautiful illustration! Descriptive and soulful poem!
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:01 PM
a timley write i think sara, 'liked the different scenes, described around the theme..
Aul Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:22 PM
A very nice write and picture...thanks........ George
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:59 AM
endearing down to the last line, sara... tremendous reflection! :) huggs, nette
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Beautifully written. Thank you. Tony
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October 1, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Good morning Sara, how are you? Thank you for the s-mail.. and yes my puppy is doing fine,,, thanks GOD,,,,i felt blessed that night... and my heart tells me I still am... by the way this is a very interesting poem,,, take care,..p.d.
D. Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Very excellent point.. you are a brilliant woman god bless u
Foster Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:47 PM
A vivid image of the eaglets striking out on their own. Nicely done Sara...cheers Margaret
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September 30, 2011 at 7:11 PM
Such amazing images you have in this piece... wonderful... a true poet makes the reader feel as you have just done.... luv Michael
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