Winter's Misery

It can't gush into

    the ravine in frozen state,

          'though branches guard it.



Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, Icy Cascade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 27, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. I like the title--as it has been one heck of a long winter here in North Dakota. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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February 25, 2010 at 6:30 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Andrew. I wish you the very best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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February 24, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Wow Andrew~ This looks like a winner to me! Laura :)
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February 24, 2010 at 9:43 AM
clever one
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