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Winter's Ice

Pristine as crystal Light captured within gleams bright Dances mystical

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2012 10:11:00 PM

Tim,,, very pretty... like a dream... your haiku is very beautiful...always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 10:55:00 PM

This is a great sounding winter haiku, Tim!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2011 12:13:00 PM

Wow Tim, this is a fantastic write! I just love the line, "Light captured within gleams bright, " it's so soothing!! Great words, crystal, light, gleams, and mystical, all make up the best quality of a poem!! Excellent work!!