Winter's Gone

Your kisses fell like rain on me
(Oh gentle storm, oh ecstacy!),
And I embraced and held you fast
To make our Winter last.

Yet 'twasn't Winter; no, 'twas May
(Oh stormy May, oh wintry May!),
And oh the snowing, oh the blast!
Your kissings sweet amassed!

But now the sky's an awful blue,
And not one cloud re-hails my view.
I'd back turn time if I knew how,
And June make Winter, always, now!

And yet, if I have just one gain---
A mist of email in place of rain---
I'll tell my fingers, "Type all this:
My soul's whole year is one Fall kiss."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 24, 2008 at 5:14 AM
Switching from 8886 to 8888 is most effective... magnificent cadence, rhyme and imagery and marvelous phrasing. BRAVO Brian! Best wishes, Keith
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