Winter's Decor

Hoar frost icicles decorating landscape winter lands delight

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Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 9:03:00 PM

Phyllis, lovethe haiku~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

David Smalling

Date: 11/17/2010 5:27:00 PM

Those icicles are so beautiful ... they seem to flash and drip with light. Good write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2010 4:32:00 PM

Hey how did I miss this one? Yes, iciciles can be really pretty decorations. I saw them all over trees in Kentucky one year after an ice storm. Such enchantment. LUv, Andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/11/2010 5:00:00 AM

i don't want to hear about icicles yet!jhl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/6/2010 12:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work...I will look at the blog also, take care while you work. There is a tree here called a sweet gum tree that has these spiney balls that will roll you right on the ground. I hate those trees. the trees are hard to get rid of too.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/6/2010 9:29:00 AM

Dear friend in my mind the "thought/ prayer/ meditation" expressed in a haiku about nature is not meant to have an end, therefor no period. IT is not a sentence ,if it is, it is not a haiku but a sentence. No capitalization is desired for the same reason. Play with your idea is the subject the hoar frost or the trees decide and place that in line one and the mystical action in line 2, line 3 can be an emotion or senstation attained by experiencing lines 1 & 2. Hope this helps! Light & Love