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Winter's Day Triolets

I find I'm blind, I'm cold and lost. A lesson that this winter's brought. I'm storm beset and tempest tossed. I find I'm blind, I'm cold and lost Dark winter's chill of silver frost has froze my mind, I'm lost in thought. I find I'm blind, I'm cold and lost A lesson that this winter's brought. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh! Now the sun's come out to play on this once dreary winter's day! Inviting warmth and love to stay. Oh! Now the sun's come out to play. A dash of light, a single ray has changed my very thoughts today. Oh! Now the sun's come out to play on this once dreary winter's day! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/8/2010 2:40:00 AM
loved it
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Date: 9/7/2010 8:32:00 PM
Gosh, where were YOU when I hosted my triolet contest a few months ago? You have the rhythm of a triolet down to art form!! Good message too. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/7/2010 4:16:00 PM
lovely poem of hope. I appreciated the consistent meter and simple rhyme structure. An easy, fluid read. Nice job!
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:13:00 PM
You see what I mean Dory, you have the talent. this is amazing, just one thing, need more poems. did u read soup mail?
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Date: 9/7/2010 12:10:00 PM
Once again, I like the rhyme scheme. I think it actually compliments the very tone of this piece.
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Date: 9/7/2010 11:36:00 AM
yes! the cycle of life...one never need worry the cycle never ends. Light & Love
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