Winters Day
Winters day
On this very cold,miserable, and blustery day, you're awakened out of a dead sleep,by the sounds of the violent rain pounding against the trees,making them shake and bend to the point of breaking without even breaking.And, at the same time,rain is painting your windows with a messages of fury. But how quickly that's forgotten,when the smells from the rain start to fill your nose with childhood memories.The kind that reminded you of the rainy days you would stay home from school,and help with baking cookies.
So you go down to the kitchen to bake some chocolate chip cookies.And as you're waiting for your cookies to bake,your start to contemplate whether or not to call out sick. But from how the weather is sounding outside,makes your decision much easier. Well also the smell of the cookies baking. Now that your cookies are done, you head back up to your room.So as your sitting on the edge of your bed, reading your favorite book, and eating your freshly baked cookies.
Then from out of nowhere,without warning,you hear rainy tires passing by sounding like thunder,followed by a loud crash BOOOMMM !! nearly shaking your house of its foundation.With sheer panic,you quickly run to the window,nearly dropping you cookies. You frantically wipe the fog and dew covering your window with your hands . And you couldn't believe what appeared before your eyes.I mean,first you see a crowed of people young ,and old gathering on the wet streets. Then some of the people have their heads down shaking in disbelief,while others,are screaming their lungs out. And the rest are on their cell phones taking pictures and others,are making frantic calls.
Then you hear sounds of sirens slowly approaching,along with the raging sounds of thunder in the background as lightning lights up the dusk sky with fire. You tell yourself,wow!! what a change of event. I mean,all you wanted was to call out sick, and make use of this rainy day.Thats when you heard somebody yell"CUT""good job everybody,that's all for today.
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