Winter's Breath

Winter sticks its icy nose onto the window glass
causing dust motes to rise and fly as they pass
You can almost see them shiver as they shy away,
not wanting to go outside  into the frigid air to play

Blinds are closed at 4:00 o'clock and tea is on to steep
Supper is early and by 8:00 o'clock all are asleep
Cats snuggle close in bed, seeking warmth where they can
Covers are raised high under chins of every child and man

Breath draws its portraits in the chilly air with puffy whirls
breath from nostrils exposed, rises ceiling-ward in curls
When morning comes, will build a cheerful fire in the stove
as we gather close around, not daring far to from it to rove

Ice skates hang up pegs by the ice-rimed back door,
scarves, gloves, mufflers, in piles taken from the store
No one thinks to complain about the weather outside
They just await an hour when there will a joyful sleigh ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/13/2018 8:04:00 AM
nice comfortable write...a few year ago the power was out one winter and we had to huddle round the fireplace and use the propane camper stove
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Date: 12/13/2018 1:26:00 AM
"The ice rimed back door" - I had not thought of this for years, but wow, the back door was so cold, and so many things were hanging there! Thank you for the memories, my friend.
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Date: 12/12/2018 10:56:00 PM
Such a vivid depiction of life away from the urban jungle in winter. So refreshing to read!! I go back in time and drink deeply of your invigorating waters. Thank you. Best always, Gershon
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