Winter's

Winter's, Compassion blooms, For my lost warmth cradled, Yet hope stirs deep within flakes heart, It's life

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Paige Hind

Date: 1/3/2025 4:22:00 PM

Just beautiful, dear friend - lovely language <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 1/4/2025 7:23:00 PM

Life hurts sometimes, in ways we can not always conceptualize; but we have to persevere for those around us... that is what true love is... A.S.

Paige Hind
Date: 1/3/2025 6:23:00 PM

An intelligent thought for me to consider <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 1/3/2025 4:45:00 PM

Sometimes the best way to realize that you are still alive is to walk into a blizzard. Letting the snowflakes stick to you in the process. What if there was a true fifth law of thermodynamics? Called life... A.S.

Tom Woody

Date: 1/1/2025 6:48:00 AM

So true, winter represents, not death, but merely sleeping. Have a great day

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 1/3/2025 4:36:00 PM

I firmly believe that truly great writing comes from being able to distill sorrow and make ink out of it. Even if it gets stuck in the freezer, and needs to be thawed out from time to time. Warmly ;) A.S.