Winter Wonders (Haiku Number 24)

Small stretch each evening
Weeping willows tinged with snow
cold airs and graces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 11, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I really like the feel of the opening line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing! Karen
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January 7, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Love your Haiku...I love Weeping Willows...Marty
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January 5, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Great Haiku, Deirdre! Pretty picture! Peace, Audrey
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January 5, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Deirdre. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 5, 2010 at 2:31 AM
At 24 , my Winter wonders , will she write some more ???? Clever , clever line : " cold airs and graces " .......!!!!!..
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January 4, 2010 at 11:07 PM
makes me shiver.......well done!
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