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Winter Wonderland

Freshly fallen snow, Large masses of frozen lakes; Lined by frosted trees. ___________________ Inspired by Abe Lopez's Haiku Seasons Contest.

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Karl Sparks

Date: 5/4/2009 11:15:00 PM

Sounds like my home around November

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:20:00 PM

Good luck with this one in the contest. You paint lovely scenes with your work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2009 3:53:00 PM

Beautiful, Raul! Those frosted trees look like they're encased by crystal. What a magical image you paint!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 7:10:00 AM

Right in the camera's eye ... definitely accurate.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/21/2009 9:12:00 PM

I love reading your work. I can always expect it to be filled with beautiful imagery and the passion of your love for nature. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/21/2009 10:24:00 AM

Godd luck, the work outlines winter nicely.

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/20/2009 9:14:00 PM

truely beautiful, the cold days of winter can be so wonderful, nature at it's best, much like this write! Thanks for stopping by to comment on my work very much appreciated. Charlene

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 9:16:00 AM

A painting. I see it clearly in all it's splendid winter beauty. Good luck! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/20/2009 7:37:00 AM

This iws filled with awesome imagery...the last line is wonderful to see.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 4/20/2009 7:21:00 AM

Wobbling iceskates, Large coat and gloves; Like learning to walk. ;) .... lovely poetry you write!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2009 7:09:00 AM

Makes me think of Yosemite in winter, ....we were there recently, ...was the most beautiful scene...just like your poem.

Diane Christian

Date: 4/20/2009 3:33:00 AM

a nice poem, I love snow, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, my new life poem was one of the first ones I posted so is a surprise, God bless you from diane

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/20/2009 2:00:00 AM

Brrrr. feels like the depths of winter! Nice Haiku form with lovely description paints a chilling picture. Thanks for your lovely comments left on 'Serenade', kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.