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Winter Wonderland

Freshly fallen snow,
Large masses of frozen lakes;
Lined by frosted trees.











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Inspired by Abe Lopez's 
Haiku Seasons Contest.

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Karl Sparks

May 4, 2009 at 11:15 PM

Sounds like my home around November

Tyler Martin

April 27, 2009 at 10:20 PM

Good luck with this one in the contest. You paint lovely scenes with your work.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2009 at 3:53 PM

Beautiful, Raul! Those frosted trees look like they're encased by crystal. What a magical image you paint!

L'Nass Shango

April 22, 2009 at 7:10 AM

Right in the camera's eye ... definitely accurate.

Lena Townsend

April 21, 2009 at 9:12 PM

I love reading your work. I can always expect it to be filled with beautiful imagery and the passion of your love for nature. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Tyler Davis

April 21, 2009 at 10:24 AM

Godd luck, the work outlines winter nicely.

Charlene Bird

April 20, 2009 at 9:14 PM

truely beautiful, the cold days of winter can be so wonderful, nature at it's best, much like this write! Thanks for stopping by to comment on my work very much appreciated. Charlene

Sharon Winter

April 20, 2009 at 9:16 AM

A painting. I see it clearly in all it's splendid winter beauty. Good luck! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

April 20, 2009 at 7:37 AM

This iws filled with awesome imagery...the last line is wonderful to see.

Izzy Gumbo

April 20, 2009 at 7:21 AM

Wobbling iceskates, Large coat and gloves; Like learning to walk. ;) .... lovely poetry you write!

Carrie Richards

April 20, 2009 at 7:09 AM

Makes me think of Yosemite in winter, ....we were there recently, ...was the most beautiful scene...just like your poem.

Diane Christian

April 20, 2009 at 3:33 AM

a nice poem, I love snow, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, my new life poem was one of the first ones I posted so is a surprise, God bless you from diane

Anna-Marie Docherty

April 20, 2009 at 2:00 AM

Brrrr. feels like the depths of winter! Nice Haiku form with lovely description paints a chilling picture. Thanks for your lovely comments left on 'Serenade', kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

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