Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Winter Wishes

Angels in the snow
     Look around
          They’re all around
               Elf and cherub cheeks
Flapping wild wings with scarves, coats and laughter

Fantasy of evergreens
     Look around
          They’re all around
               Silver and Gold snow
And glorious stars stunning the hereafter

Whimsical lovers
     Look around
          They’re all around
               Ice cold skates in spin
Their dreamy hearts and lifts, sought after

White-bearded Santas
     Look around
          They’re all around
                With jolly tummies
Global doppelgängers with ho-ho laughter

12/3/2021
Contest: Winter Wishes
Sponsor: Chantelle Ann Cooke

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Tom Cunningham December 7, 2021 at 12:08 PM Love your winter imagery Kim, I love the winter in all its glory. Tom Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 4:09 PM Snow in small quantities is beautiful! Thank you, Tom!

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 6, 2021 at 6:44 AM It's beautiful lyrical verse, Kim, describing the magical winter enjoyments we wish for! I live in a snowy and cold country - I can imagine and relate to your wishes. Thanks for visiting my page. Love and best wishes ~ Mala Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 4:08 PM Thank you, Mala!

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2021 at 3:46 PM Creative lines you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. It is rare for us to have snow or ice, so we don't get the enjoyment that some have with these, but we don't have the disadvantages either. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 4:08 PM We don’t have too much either…usually

P.S. Awtry December 5, 2021 at 9:57 AM Joyful celebration! I could see this being danced in a musical! Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 4:08 PM Thank you, sweet poet!

Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2021 at 1:49 AM This one had me dancing and singing; gets me in the Christmas spirit so I thank you Kim! Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 4:07 PM Joy to the world…falalalala!

Silpika Kalita December 4, 2021 at 6:38 PM First of all, I am in love with the presentation of those Winter Wishes, apart from those my all time favorite imageries uplifting the mood of the upcoming auspicious event... Silpika Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 3:47 PM Thank you, Silpika! :)

Gershon Wolf December 4, 2021 at 4:37 PM As long as those doppelgangers don't turn into dopey gangsters, those Santas can keep looking around all they want. :) Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 3:47 PM Right?! LOL

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2021 at 11:30 AM I love your approach to the challenge. Hope I can be as creative when I attempt this one! Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2021 at 2:28 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Demetrios Trifiatis December 4, 2021 at 2:41 AM Delightful and uplifting creation reflecting the spirit of Christmas, my dearest Kim! Blessing Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2021 at 4:15 AM May your spirits be way lifted up, sweet friend! Thank you :)

Supraja Kannan December 4, 2021 at 12:10 AM So beautifully written,Kim... Enjoyable verses... Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2021 at 4:15 AM Thank you, dear one!

Harry Horsman December 3, 2021 at 5:54 PM Oh, this is a happy poem, and sure does break through the lay of despondency. Love it, Kim. Happy Christmas to you and your family. Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 6:36 PM Thank you, sweet poet!

Victor Buhagiar December 3, 2021 at 1:13 PM Lovely and jolly. I'm always hoping you will have a happy Christmas. Your father is always in my thoughts. May Christmas bring some cheer. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 1:37 PM Thank you, Victor! Dad is doing better. I have witnessed the stages of grief firsthand! Merry Christmas to you!

Vijay Pandit December 3, 2021 at 1:04 PM Much joy in your verse, Kim. I enjoyed its voice. Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 1:42 PM Thank you, Vijay! :) Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 1:41 PM Thank you, Vijay! :) Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 1:37 PM Thank you, Vijay! :)