Paloma Walker Poet Rhyme

Winter Wish

Dreary, freezing
Winter days
Stuck inside 
A gloomy haze

Nowhere to go 
Nothing to see
Just as bored 
As bored can be

Sitting still 
Is getting old
Would go outside
But it's too cold

Wish for summer
Spring or fall
Anything to 
Ease this lull

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Rachel Treacher March 23, 2026 at 3:58 PM I really enjoyed your short sharp lines - crisp and neat.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 17, 2011 at 6:20 PM Enjoyed the succinct lines you employ here, Spanish Rose (love your name!) you sure bring forth your message well here, btw just want to help there's a missing "o" in too in line 4, stanza 3 -- enjoyed your write :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 17, 2011 at 6:18 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this piece with luv...