Winter Winks

A lazy sun winked at me
through the clouds
Weak warmth, denied August,
softly patted old grass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Creative one. Here, in the south we had one of the hottest Augusts ever but thank God that He is finally sending some cooler air our way. Not too cold just even to be able to enjoy the beautiful earth. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Wow. You really nailed this one, John. I can envision the landscape just as you've written it -- and the cherry on top is your humor, of course. Thanks, gw
Kauffman Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Winsome and wistful, John! Indeed, winter is just around the corner as the days and months seem to be on roller skates! Enjoyed this very much. Blessings!
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