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Winter Watch

Winter Watch

lonely fence post shudders in glittering
shroud beneath an artful gaze...
dueling owl and mouse


deborah burch©1.30.2013


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Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2013 at 6:55 AM

Very creative winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats..Sara

Kash Poet

February 17, 2013 at 5:59 AM

Love this Deborah.Congrats on your win in the contest.

Debra Squyres

February 16, 2013 at 3:08 PM

I like where you took this contest...I can see it played out. Congrats on your HM

Joseph May

February 16, 2013 at 5:29 AM

congrats on your win Deb

Francine Roberts

February 15, 2013 at 7:47 PM

congrats Deborah on your win with this lovely kimo

Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2013 at 7:33 PM

Deborah.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2013 at 4:22 PM

this was so lovely, sweetie. I love how you put animals into your kimo. Can't believe I had not seen it yet!!!

Kim Merryman

February 15, 2013 at 4:02 PM

Congrats on your HM for this lovely kimo, Deborah! Love, Kim

Connie Gildersleeve

February 15, 2013 at 3:25 PM

Deborah congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

February 4, 2013 at 2:58 PM

and the owl has it's claws around the mouse? oh sorry deborah,, you paint wonderful poetry...

Russell Sivey

January 31, 2013 at 7:32 AM

This is a truly wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Winter Watch

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