winter warmth

snowflakes drape the fields scarecrows shiver in silver~ soil keeps its grains warm
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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 10:05 AM
Back with my congrats for your win with this one
Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 1:44 AM
Great alliteration Maclawrence.. Congrats on your win..
Kitchin Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Maclawrence, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful winter haiku.
Famuyiwa Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Much appreciated Tania
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 9:11 PM
"scarecrows shiver in silver" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Famuyiwa Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Christuraj, this is well appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Oh, Maclawrence, not only do I love the alliteration, but your use of words like "drape," "shiver," and "keeps" are so wonderfully creative adding to the sense of movement and loving protection! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Sam.
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:35 PM
Oh, nice one. Great alliteration
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:37 PM
Thanks Andrea.
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