Winter Voyage

birds they are flocking wishing I had wings to fly off to warmer climes Written 12th October 2021 after witnessing flocks of birds preparing for their winter voyage...
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Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading this winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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April 2, 2022 at 4:50 PM
thank you dear Sara, so pleased you enjoyed my words today. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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October 13, 2021 at 6:13 PM
Lovely Haiku.....sensible birds. Thank you,Ann
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October 14, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Dear Shirley thank you so much for your lovely words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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October 12, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Wonderful write. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Gilmour Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Thank you so much Gina for your lovely words of encouragement. Much appreciated my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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October 12, 2021 at 1:46 AM
A lovely poem. I am not good at such short poems with a definite scheme like a Tanka. Today I wrote part of a poem with trepidation.
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October 12, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Thank you Victor, you may not write short poems, but your poems are wonderful. Thanks for your visit Victor, always appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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