winter twilight

in foggy fishy breezeless weather 
confused stars with doubt and uncertainty blink
pain within, the moon wanes


wordku
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Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 2:55 PM
I enjoyed your imagery.
Alex Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 8:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Gasun Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 8:13 PM
Beautifully sad poem my dear poet friend. Thanks for sharing another precious gem from your golden quill. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Alex Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 8:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Tor Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Winter has that effect even on the moon. Thank for sharing my friend...
Alex Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 8:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 12:44 PM
The senses filled! Hope you’re having a wonderful weekend!
Alex Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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