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Winter Sunrise

WINTER SUNRISE


the gray ache lingers

        daylight vanishes quickly

                              brilliance appears!

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Rachel W

March 31, 2010 at 5:26 PM

This poem makes me ache for another winter sunrise.

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 11:06 AM

hmmm, I think I need to find oldies of yours. I just realized I am commenting twice on your poems!

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 11:04 AM

So glad you are back, Jim, and this one leaps out at me with beauty! LUv, Andrea

Sara Lokken

March 11, 2010 at 3:56 PM

This is so beautiful, just lovely. Regards,

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 10, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Hi JMGoff, Snow in winter does make the sun shine brilliantly. And it is a nice surprise to see that sun shining. Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Chicken Blogs”. Smiles, Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

March 4, 2010 at 6:29 AM

Very nice and powerful words, Jimbo! daylight vanishes quickly brilliance appears! I like this very much! And thank you for your comments! Gert

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2010 at 10:37 PM

this is very pretty, James. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 1, 2010 at 11:36 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today James. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

March 1, 2010 at 7:41 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 28, 2010 at 8:05 PM

It is a very well written Haiku, Jim. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A

February 28, 2010 at 5:52 PM

A beautiful tiitle for such a LOVELY poem. Enjoyed reading ...

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Great Haiku! It happens fast the changes in the morning but then if one just sits and soaks up each 1/2 second it can linger on be so relaxing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick

February 28, 2010 at 2:34 PM

Thanks for bringing to all a touch of joy with this one, Jimbo! Hope you're having a beautiful Sunday! Peace, Audrey

Iolanda Scripca

February 28, 2010 at 2:28 PM

Beautiful haiku, dear James. That gray ache - I still remember it from my childhood winters...now there is no real winter where I live but I do remember it still. All the best, Iolanda