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Winter Sunrise

WINTER SUNRISE


the gray ache lingers

        daylight vanishes quickly

                              brilliance appears!

naturehaiku

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Rachel W

Date: 3/31/2010 5:26:00 PM

This poem makes me ache for another winter sunrise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 11:06:00 AM

hmmm, I think I need to find oldies of yours. I just realized I am commenting twice on your poems!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 11:04:00 AM

So glad you are back, Jim, and this one leaps out at me with beauty! LUv, Andrea

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/11/2010 3:56:00 PM

This is so beautiful, just lovely. Regards,

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/10/2010 8:38:00 AM

Hi JMGoff, Snow in winter does make the sun shine brilliantly. And it is a nice surprise to see that sun shining. Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Chicken Blogs”. Smiles, Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/4/2010 6:29:00 AM

Very nice and powerful words, Jimbo! daylight vanishes quickly brilliance appears! I like this very much! And thank you for your comments! Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2010 10:37:00 PM

this is very pretty, James. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/1/2010 11:36:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today James. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 3/1/2010 7:41:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/28/2010 8:05:00 PM

It is a very well written Haiku, Jim. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2010 5:52:00 PM

A beautiful tiitle for such a LOVELY poem. Enjoyed reading ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2010 4:19:00 PM

Great Haiku! It happens fast the changes in the morning but then if one just sits and soaks up each 1/2 second it can linger on be so relaxing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/28/2010 2:34:00 PM

Thanks for bringing to all a touch of joy with this one, Jimbo! Hope you're having a beautiful Sunday! Peace, Audrey

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/28/2010 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, dear James. That gray ache - I still remember it from my childhood winters...now there is no real winter where I live but I do remember it still. All the best, Iolanda

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/28/2010 1:50:00 PM

Hey.you bring such sunbeams James...That Winter Sunrise,today we had plenty in the soft sweet breeze..glad you re posting :)Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 1:48:00 PM

Stunning Haiku Jimbo and can hardly wait for that brilliance to appear in my neck of the woods... lovely lilting words..enjoyed.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

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