Winter Sun

Insouciant, you drift across the sky -
Going early, coming late
Dull, lazy winter sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Indeed. That is the sun in winter. Very nice
Somadas Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Yes.. Thank you Andrea..
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:14 PM
Lazy and 'non-blazey.' Agreed, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:50 PM
I was trying a new lazy poetry form.. lol..
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 2:03 AM
Excellent poem. Wish winter were hotter.
Somadas Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 2:08 AM
Thank you, Victor… Even the sun seems to have lost its character here in Saudi Arabia.
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