Winter Storm Within

Silent cold piercing light
reflecting off waves of madness
powerful unsean forces pull and twist
icey tears from God's angry heart
beat against the tender soul within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:36 AM
VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU FALESHIA
Sings Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Hey welcome to poetry soup!
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March 12, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Wow. This is really good. Love the imagery. Love it!
Stevenson Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Its really cool i like it alot, get in the chat room
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 8:51 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Holly. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 12, 2010 at 7:31 AM
A wonderful poem to read this morning. Enjoyed...
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March 12, 2010 at 7:19 AM
This is a very powerful description of the affects of depression, Holly. Indeed, it deserves comparisson to a "Winter Storm Within." Well done! Love, Carolyn
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