Winter Spring

W ind howling at my window.
I shiver and pull on my duvet slack.
N ight greets me as I go to work and back.
T hen proceed to light all sources of heat.
E ngage in knitting in my fireside seat.
R etreated to warmth of cosy cottage.

S urprise at tender buds in garden.
P eel off all those extra layers.
R eturn of sunshine thanks to prayers.
I nvigorating walks on country lanes.
N oting daffodils and crocus again.
G rateful that Spring is in the air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/6/2016 11:06:00 PM
Jean, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations Jean, wonderful write and win...
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/5/2016 12:01:00 AM
I was thrilled to come second, although any rung of the ladder is good enough for me Charlie. Thank you.
Date: 4/4/2016 1:28:00 PM
Hi Jean, What a nice poem to welcome in Spring. And congrats on your win in the contest! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:01:00 PM
To get through an Irish winter is always call for celebration Brian. Thank you for your good wishes.
Date: 4/4/2016 8:52:00 AM
I always feel your passion when you write Jean! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Date: 4/4/2016 1:15:00 PM
That is so sweet of you Hans. My heart is always invovlved in my poems.
Date: 4/4/2016 8:05:00 AM
Hi Jean, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Two wonderful Acrostics on Winter and Spring. Your songs sing so gently. Excellent work Jean. A seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 4/4/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Mike .......MIKE? There was me thinking you were an exotic Russian! With love handles.
Date: 4/4/2016 2:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Jean!!
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:34:00 AM
Thank you again Dr for taking the time to write.
Date: 4/4/2016 2:43:00 AM
Lol. It would take me ages to come up with such an acrostic..... Well, congrats Jean, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:33:00 AM
Mine take between five and ten minutes Teddy. But is that a good thing or a bad thing? And why are you laughing?
Date: 4/3/2016 11:07:00 AM
Picturesque...And beautiful...Congrats...
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/3/2016 1:49:00 PM
Not Provide..... Probir......pesty spell check!! Sorry.
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Provide.
Date: 4/3/2016 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win well written xx wendy
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Wendy.
Date: 4/3/2016 9:33:00 AM
Aren't you the smartee pants. This is an excellent poem Jean. I like crocus an I also like you. Great write and congratulations on the win. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:43:00 PM
I like you too Honey Bun.....,I knew my first born was a smarter pants when she was two years old. She asked me one day to open the back door so she could go out to see the flowers. I said " In winter there are no flowers Edna. "She replied " Well, crocus then!"
Date: 4/3/2016 7:45:00 AM
oh Jean 2 very beautiful acrostics many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I just wrote what they mean to me. I love Spring. I know when I get home after the month here in Australia my garden will be bursting to greet me.
Date: 4/3/2016 6:06:00 AM
congrats on 2nd place Jean nice imagery hugs
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Date: 4/3/2016 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Shadow. I'm delighted with this win.
Date: 3/23/2016 4:40:00 AM
- I'm waiting for spring, a little early to the summer yet - A nice poem,Jean :) - I wish you a lovely Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2016 9:35:00 AM
You hopefully will not have to wait too long Anne Lise. Happy Easter to you too. I am not 100% happy with this poem. I prefer them to rhyme.
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