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A Fall or Winter Nature Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Date: 14-11-2025

winter splinters

rows of icicles
hang from roofs like glass splinters ~
beasts sleep in burrows



2nd place
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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 10:02 AM
I really like this along with rhyming effect of the title
Veepuri Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Andrea, thank you so much. I'm glad you noticed the rhyming title. Your appreciation truly encourages me.
Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 1:38 AM
nature’s harsh beauty with hidden life.. Great win Srinivas..
Veepuri Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Jenish Somadas. I'm happy the contrast between winter's harshness and hidden life came through. Grateful for your kind words.
Kitchin Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:26 AM
Srinivas, congratulations on your winning placement with your nicely done winter haiku.
Veepuri Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Thank you sincerely. I appreciate your congratulations and encouragement- it means a lot to me.
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Picturesque haiku. Congratulations!
Veepuri Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Alex, many thanks. I'm glad you found the imagery vivid. Your encouragement is truly appreciated.
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