winter snowfall

winters first snowfall
freshly brightens the drab ground ~
snowflake radiance
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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 9:34 AM
So pretty!
Chiri Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 10:02 PM
I normally don’t enjoy a haiku because to me it feels. Like something was missing….but this one felt different like I finally got it!:)oved the piece and thx for making haiku’s make sense to me!
Kitchin Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Brenda, thank you.
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Gorgeous. <3
Kitchin Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Paige, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Your "winter snowfall" tells a wonderful story in just 3 lines. "Good Luck" if for contest... I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day/holiday writing away...............
Kitchin Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Paula, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Dear Tania, OH, how I love the first winter's snowfall and your haiku, which makes it even more anticipated. Autumn Blessings, Dear Tania, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Daniel, thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:04 PM
If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me, Tania. Thank you for sharing it with us. I like hearing the soft sound of snow falling and the deep quiet that goes along with it. Snow here is scary because we are not prepared for it. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Sara, thank you.
Messina Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:43 AM
It's always that first snowfall that we all can't wait for. And it's always the second that makes us all wish spring would come sooner (lol) Lovely haiku, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Charlie, thank you.
Kauffman Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:17 PM
There is a very special, magical quality about the first snowfall. You have captured that magic and cast a spell with your haiku! Blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Sam, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Dear Tania, I love the first snow of winter, for it fills the air with a little magic. We probably won't get one until mid-December. Love your Haiku that brings a little early snow joy. Autumn Blessings, Dear Tania, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Daniel, thank you.
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Great example
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Eve, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 2:06 AM
Hi Tania, rarely saw snow and never in Malta. We don't have any rain yet.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Wish you read my poem.
Kitchin Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 3:37 AM
Victor, where I live we get a lot of snow starting now and through the winter. Thanks for your visit.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 2:41 PM
How nice!
Kitchin Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Kim, thank you.
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