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Winter Sniffles

snow falls in thick drifts whitening our green landscape I need a hanky

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Pretty Feet

Date: 9/18/2009 7:55:00 PM

Just like with every season, I look forward to fall and winter. Could the sniffles be from playing in the snow? Nicely done.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 12:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, nice haiku..one of my favorite forms...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2009 12:30:00 PM

I know what you mean, make it a puffs plus.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2009 10:54:00 AM

Flu season is right around the bend and although winter paints a pure landscape the air is filled with nasty bugs. Nice haiku, Patricia -- and oh so true. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 10:44:00 AM

Nicely done Haiku. Keep writing. Sara