Winter Slumber

Cozy patchwork skies,
Blanket the frozen forest: 
Hibernating trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mckenzie Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Very nice it paints a grand winter pic! Laura :)
Hicks Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Hmm... I believe I'd like to see those patchwork skies! On my first plain trip I could see the patchwork fields seen FROM the sky. But not the other way around... there's a peacefulness about this haiku. The hibernating trees is probably what does it... good work!
Chircop Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Those patchwork skies..how beautiful..Lovely images penned.Im seeing Carrie s blog below and i too wonder about Ab and his family.I wish all soupers could be.back for good
Richards Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Our trees have just come out of hibernation........achooo !! :) Hope you had a wonderful Easter, Raul !! I love seeing your beautiful haikus grace the pages of PS !! (I often think of Abe.....give him a hello for me if you can........the two of you were some of my first and most thoughtful friends of the early soup days. :)
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