Richard Pickett Poet Haiku

Winter Sledding

Winter slopes abound,
Flakes of white, are all around
More are coming down


Let's find a hill,
We'll sled down it,for a thrill
Trek back to the top




 This is a Haiku/ Senryu combo...Want to go sledding !

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December 8, 2009 at 1:45 PM Reminds me of my childhood. You have me smiling with this scene. So you are Jared's dad. Welcome to our poetry family! This is definitely worth more than one read. Keep on writing! Karen

Doris Culverhouse December 5, 2009 at 4:38 PM we have a big hill and we just go down on a heavy duty wagon, since we don't get much snow.

Mary Meade Stephenson December 5, 2009 at 7:27 AM Next week babe~ Then there will be enough snow....great job! love ya~mary

Charmaine Chircop December 4, 2009 at 2:58 PM This poem makes me wanna go sledding,Make snowmen,play snow fight and more..lovely indeed--Charma

Marty Owens December 3, 2009 at 7:52 PM Very nice...I'd love to go sledding...enjoyed reading...Marty

James Marshall Goff December 3, 2009 at 4:52 PM I have my childhood sleds in my writing-room right now! Richard! comforting memories! nice poem! jimbo

Raul Moreno December 3, 2009 at 2:13 PM Sounds like fun, I haven't sledded either in some time...Raul

Mary Meade Stephenson December 3, 2009 at 1:55 PM Superb haiku/senryu combo....fantastic imagery captured in so few words...Great Job Babe!! M

December 3, 2009 at 1:25 PM Oh, this reminds me of childhood and brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing this day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen

Jared Pickett December 3, 2009 at 12:53 PM I see you.... I haven't sledded in many years, busy.... Good job pops.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick December 3, 2009 at 12:37 PM Going down sounds like fun. The going up sounds like work. I would need a combination ski lift and downhill slope. Great winter write. Keep the magical and fun pen flowing. Sara