Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Winter Skin - Summer Skin

Winter Skin/ Summer Skin


Winter Skin

cap on head
Rudolph-nosed; my cheeks
rosy red


Summer Skin

my suntan lotion
like rivulets of warm butter
drips from me


Oct. 21, 2021
For William Kekaula's Lune (Mixed Pair) Poetry Contest

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Paige Hind August 16, 2024 at 6:13 PM Hey, this is very clever! What an unique perspective!

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2021 at 2:42 PM Sound delightful for both seasons. Enjoyed reading your mix for the contest. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly October 22, 2021 at 11:59 PM Both are very seasonal a good mixed pair...Delice

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 22, 2021 at 2:54 AM Wow the winter part is exotic fantastic for me and summer part is beach relatable. Kudos for two bunches of super stanzas. >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Caren Krutsinger October 22, 2021 at 12:33 AM What a lovely mixed pair! Beautiful.

Michael Tor October 21, 2021 at 3:37 PM Nice entry Andrea...

Judy Ball October 21, 2021 at 1:45 PM Ah yes. Winter skin itches and is chapped and red. Summer skin is warm and brown and feels good because of all the suntan lotion. Of course sometimes we do burn and then it's no paradise either. Good stuff here Andrea. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu October 21, 2021 at 11:47 AM Hello Andrea, yes different seasons , different skin care. Hugs.

Robert James Liguori October 21, 2021 at 11:28 AM Oooh you have to do another, Spring and Autumn skin!

Regina Mcintosh October 21, 2021 at 10:07 AM Wonderful write. Love it. God bless you with a win. Love ya, Gina

Victor Buhagiar October 21, 2021 at 7:21 AM That's quite a mix. I have stopped swimming because I can never put lotion on my back.

Natasha L Scragg October 21, 2021 at 7:20 AM Love the way you've drawn this contrast Andrea. Very clever. Lovely imagery too... Rudolph nosed.. brilliant.