Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Haiku

Winter Sheds Its Pall

winter sheds its pall
flora springs to life anew
with flamboyant flair

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in Carol Brown's "Nature Comes To Life" Contest - February 2011

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James Foulk June 24, 2011 at 12:51 PM very creative Haiku Bob really enjoyed it.

Kash Poet March 1, 2011 at 5:39 AM Congrats Robert on your well deserved 2nd place win with this beauitiful Haiku----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2011 at 8:43 PM Congratulations, Robert. It's always a pleasure to read your winning poetry.

Francine Roberts February 28, 2011 at 8:20 PM lovely haiku Bob, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2011 at 5:43 PM Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:03 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Bob

Sharon Ruebel February 28, 2011 at 10:29 AM Hello Robert, Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. This is beautiful As Always, Shar

John Freeman February 28, 2011 at 10:12 AM Good to see you poem at the top Bob. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place recognition.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 7:19 AM Congrats Bob on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. again sharing second place with one of the best is an honor and pleasure for me as a poetess luv.. enjoy..

Tahera Mannan February 28, 2011 at 7:04 AM Super last line Robert. Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Bob. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 27, 2011 at 1:46 PM Splendid piece Bob .. great imagery in your lines .. seeing Winter shed to Spring .. good luck in Carol's contest my friend with luv..

Ralph Taylor February 26, 2011 at 4:17 PM Awesome entry, Bob. Great haiku. Good luck. You guys have a great weekend. Ralphie

Mohammad Yamin February 25, 2011 at 8:22 AM Very beautiful Haiku. Most impressive, specially the first line reading 'winter sheds its pall'. The Haiku paints an elegant picture of spring. Thank you also for your enlightened comments on my poem the Yesteryears. -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2011 at 11:37 PM cool little haiku, robert. And a touch of allliterations as well.

Nette Onclaud February 24, 2011 at 10:14 PM colorful artwork here, robert.. best wishes in the contest.:) hugggs, nette