WINTER ROSES MYSTIC

Written: November 3rd, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose ************ winter roses stand beauty is not warmth, but will~ to grow in quiet snow burdens petals not enough to break the stem~ just enough to coach wind omits beauty the rose still remembers, though~ how red riddles white roots in ground frozen whisper to the sleepy buds~ "pain is not the end." sunlight, slim as thread festoons the thorn with gold lace~ a crown for those brave rose has no accent its quiet song is louder~ than a thousand springs
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 5:52 PM
I enjoyed how your Haikus subtly entwine, ....you truly captured the quiet beauty and strength of roses. well done for the contest, Texas hugs, Sara
Narain Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Your poem is evocative, emotionally resonant and visually strong. It captures a meaningful reflection on endurance, quiet strength, and beauty in hardship.
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:18 PM
I learned I did mine incorrectly, so now I have revised it. Yours is sure to win, Sotto
Hind Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 7:04 PM
"the rose still remembers, though~ how red riddles white" amazing, a fav this whole poem
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:52 PM
- Beautifully described, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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