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full moon between trees branches scribbled on her face aging gracefully HI-KU(2) Contest Judged: 12/16/2020 8:43:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 5th Place

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Date: 11/6/2022 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Through those trees you see the wrinkles of aging which is very creative way of thinking.
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Date: 5/22/2021 6:49:00 AM
Lovely poem, Suzanne ~
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Date: 12/17/2020 4:01:00 PM
what amazing imagery Suzanne, many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:44:00 AM
Your haiku is breathtaking, SuZ. I just love it! "Branches scribbled on her face" is simply ingenious! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/16/2020 3:18:00 PM
It goes so well with the picture. GREAT win. Congrats, Suzanne
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Date: 12/16/2020 11:32:00 AM
Suzanne, congratulations on your winning haiku. Love your choice of words and imagery - "branches scribble on her face."
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/20/2019 9:59:00 PM
Love this poem--wonderful imagery; so well written!
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Date: 3/12/2019 9:47:00 PM
What a magnificent haiku -amazing imagery! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 3/11/2019 9:05:00 AM
Oh, yes! Wonderful haiku!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Kim: Appreciate you. SuZ
Date: 3/10/2019 2:36:00 PM
This is a proper haiku, Suzanne! I love it...and I'm going to fav it! Hugs // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2019 1:22:00 PM
Such an honor. Thanks, Paul.
Date: 1/28/2019 10:06:00 PM
The image shines thru, Suzanne, confirmed with line 3...nice!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2019 7:46:00 AM
Hi James: Your validation means a lot. SuZ
Date: 1/28/2019 6:34:00 PM
Awesome haiku, Suzanne. A FAVE.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Line: Truly appreciate you. SuZ
Date: 1/28/2019 2:43:00 PM
OH< OH< OH....."Branches scribbled on her face",,,,,,,magnificent imagery
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks John ...you left me smiling. SuZ
Date: 1/28/2019 10:03:00 AM
Lovely..shining in moonlight.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/28/2019 10:26:00 AM
Hi Vijay:Great to see you my friend. SuZ

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