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Winter Moon

full moon between trees
branches scribbled on her face
aging gracefully

HI-KU(2)
Contest Judged:  12/16/2020 8:43:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
5th Place

Copyright © Suzanne Delaney | Year Posted 2019

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November 6, 2022 at 2:20 PM

Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Through those trees you see the wrinkles of aging which is very creative way of thinking.

May 22, 2021 at 6:49 AM

Lovely poem, Suzanne ~

December 17, 2020 at 4:01 PM

what amazing imagery Suzanne, many congrats :-) hugs jan xx

December 17, 2020 at 9:44 AM

Your haiku is breathtaking, SuZ. I just love it! "Branches scribbled on her face" is simply ingenious! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2020 at 3:18 PM

It goes so well with the picture. GREAT win. Congrats, Suzanne

December 16, 2020 at 11:32 AM

Suzanne, congratulations on your winning haiku. Love your choice of words and imagery - "branches scribble on her face."

Kai Michael Neumann

January 10, 2020 at 8:03 AM

Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

April 20, 2019 at 9:59 PM

Love this poem--wonderful imagery; so well written!

Pandita Sietesantos

March 12, 2019 at 9:47 PM

What a magnificent haiku -amazing imagery! Hugs. Pandita

March 11, 2019 at 9:05 AM

Oh, yes! Wonderful haiku!

Suzanne Delaney

March 11, 2019 at 1:20 PM

Thanks Kim: Appreciate you. SuZ

March 10, 2019 at 2:36 PM

This is a proper haiku, Suzanne! I love it...and I'm going to fav it! Hugs // paul

Suzanne Delaney

March 11, 2019 at 1:22 PM

Such an honor. Thanks, Paul.

James Marshall Goff

January 28, 2019 at 10:06 PM

The image shines thru, Suzanne, confirmed with line 3...nice!

Suzanne Delaney

January 29, 2019 at 7:46 AM

Hi James: Your validation means a lot. SuZ

January 28, 2019 at 6:34 PM

Awesome haiku, Suzanne. A FAVE.

Suzanne Delaney

January 29, 2019 at 7:45 AM

Thanks Line: Truly appreciate you. SuZ

January 28, 2019 at 2:43 PM

OH< OH< OH....."Branches scribbled on her face",,,,,,,magnificent imagery

Suzanne Delaney

January 29, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thanks John ...you left me smiling. SuZ

January 28, 2019 at 10:03 AM

Lovely..shining in moonlight.

Suzanne Delaney

January 28, 2019 at 10:26 AM

Hi Vijay:Great to see you my friend. SuZ

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