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Winter Magic

Moonbeam’s angelic gazes and frosty phrases chill woven, dreamy, nature-luxurious laces, iced in vibrant, wonderland prized traces, to brighten all young and old human faces. Sparkles of brightly twinkling sunshine as stillness pervade human’s routine time. Otherness grows as pure snowflakes chime to glorify mother nature’s translucent rhyme. Essence of radiance in cold grown frosty finds snowbird’s chatter cheerful and lofty. Woods and fields are energized glossy to silently accept snowscapes now gauzy. Jewels from silver and white topaz storms adorn, flawlessly winterize and brilliantly transform, as frozen bling of delight and also concern control our lives during winter’s vivacious term.

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Date: 12/29/2018 11:34:00 AM
CayCay, the monorhymes and your choice of words throughout are brilliant! I also love the last two lines, because Winter brings a "frozen bling of delight", but it also brings "concern" as it `controls our lives.' Congrats for your win on mile 5 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. ~Mark
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 4:06:00 PM
CayCay, your gracious comment has touched my heart. Thank you so much. Best wishes to you and yours. ~Mark
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/29/2018 1:59:00 PM
Mark - thank you for all the time and energy you surely put into sponsoring this ongoing contest. Thru you, we are given the chance to renew poems that turn old way too fast and I appreciate that. Sincerely, thank you for this opportunity, for your efforts and for your unique light on Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 12/29/2018 10:12:00 AM
You employ some very creative winter images, CayCay. Congratulations on your win!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/29/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Sweetie. Isn't it great when we can bring back our poems that turn 'old' way too fast? Love all your visits, and I appreciate them, too. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 3/8/2018 3:20:00 PM
Lovely write CayCay, congratulations...
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Date: 3/7/2018 1:24:00 PM
So beautifully written with amazing imagery, CayCay. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, CayCay.
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Date: 3/6/2018 6:22:00 AM
Winter magic almost over but you have placed us back into its wonderland! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/22/2017 2:10:00 PM
CayCay, the stunning depth of your thoughts, words, lush lines of poetic imagery is deep and superb. Your poetry scintillates in my imagination beautifully and brilliantly.. Love it! ~Susan
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Date: 1/16/2017 4:42:00 PM
I needed these vibrant images today I'm not a big fan of winter here in Montreal let's say :/ very well done poem By the way I really appreciate the In Depth look you gave to my poem divine timing and feel honoured to have a serious writer reading mine, thanks !
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Date: 1/6/2017 8:23:00 AM
I have missed your beautiful words for too long a time...Keep writing, as I'll catch up sometime. ( ) Hugs!
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:40:00 AM
Superbly written.Hugs
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:42:00 AM
Exquisitely stunning imagery CayCay, the essence of the sentiment stands precise and affecting. Simply lovely.
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Date: 1/3/2017 10:29:00 PM
FOUR STANZA'S of enchantingly image making strokes of a poetic painter's glowing, ink-laden brush! Creativity on this is offffffff the cccccharts, a true pleasure to read!
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:55:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your top win :) great flow, great rhyme :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:17:00 AM
I loved the meter and the rhymes in this but most of all I loved the picture you painted with your words. What a beautiful scene I have jut walked through.
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Date: 1/3/2017 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful! I especially love the last stanza...silver and white topaz, frozen bling! As always a pleasure, CayCay!
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:30:00 AM
magical, cay.... you got the spirit in its finest form.. congrats and huggs.. more soon; still having internet issues..
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:48:00 AM
That last stanza is breathtaking, CayCay. I can see the magic of the fast disappearing winter jewellery everywhere in your poem. Congratulations :)
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:53:00 AM
"Frozen bling of delight" - amazing:) congratulations on your wonderful win, CayCay:)
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Date: 1/3/2017 1:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem making the shortlist CayCay I'm very happy for you. : ) 7
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Date: 1/2/2017 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win CayCay. I'll be glad when spring gets here. I miss the colors:(
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:23:00 PM
"Jewels from silver and White topaz storms" ...wonderful!! Well done my friend!! congratulations on your win!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:18:00 PM
Caycay, I am so happy to see you with this win. This is indeed a magical winter poem!! Miss you, my friend!!! I got home Sunday and will really miss my lazy vacation time!!!
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:37:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your fine win! Such beautiful imagery! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations Caycay, love this poem a joy to read.
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Date: 1/2/2017 3:44:00 PM
oh so beautiful Caycay and well done for being on the winners list!:-) hugs Jan xx
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