Winter Magic

Moonbeam’s angelic gazes and frosty phrases chill woven, dreamy, nature-luxurious laces, iced in vibrant, wonderland prized traces, to brighten all young and old human faces. Sparkles of brightly twinkling sunshine as stillness pervade human’s routine time. Otherness grows as pure snowflakes chime to glorify mother nature’s translucent rhyme. Essence of radiance in cold grown frosty finds snowbird’s chatter cheerful and lofty. Woods and fields are energized glossy to silently accept snowscapes now gauzy. Jewels from silver and white topaz storms adorn, flawlessly winterize and brilliantly transform, as frozen bling of delight and also concern control our lives during winter’s vivacious term.
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Toney Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 11:34 AM
CayCay, the monorhymes and your choice of words throughout are brilliant! I also love the last two lines, because Winter brings a "frozen bling of delight", but it also brings "concern" as it `controls our lives.' Congrats for your win on mile 5 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. ~Mark
Toney Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 4:06 PM
CayCay, your gracious comment has touched my heart. Thank you so much. Best wishes to you and yours. ~Mark
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Mark - thank you for all the time and energy you surely put into sponsoring this ongoing contest. Thru you, we are given the chance to renew poems that turn old way too fast and I appreciate that. Sincerely, thank you for this opportunity, for your efforts and for your unique light on Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Devonshire Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:12 AM
You employ some very creative winter images, CayCay. Congratulations on your win!
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Sweetie. Isn't it great when we can bring back our poems that turn 'old' way too fast? Love all your visits, and I appreciate them, too. All the best ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Lovely write CayCay, congratulations...
Haight Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 1:24 PM
So beautifully written with amazing imagery, CayCay. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 6:46 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, CayCay.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Winter magic almost over but you have placed us back into its wonderland! Congratulations!
Ashley Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:10 PM
CayCay, the stunning depth of your thoughts, words, lush lines of poetic imagery is deep and superb. Your poetry scintillates in my imagination beautifully and brilliantly.. Love it! ~Susan
Kriticos Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:42 PM
I needed these vibrant images today I'm not a big fan of winter here in Montreal let's say :/ very well done poem By the way I really appreciate the In Depth look you gave to my poem divine timing and feel honoured to have a serious writer reading mine, thanks !
Cwiak Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 8:23 AM
I have missed your beautiful words for too long a time...Keep writing, as I'll catch up sometime. ( ) Hugs!
Breedt Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 10:40 AM
Superbly written.Hugs
P  Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Exquisitely stunning imagery CayCay, the essence of the sentiment stands precise and affecting. Simply lovely.
Lindley Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 10:29 PM
FOUR STANZA'S of enchantingly image making strokes of a poetic painter's glowing, ink-laden brush! Creativity on this is offffffff the cccccharts, a true pleasure to read!
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:55 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your top win :) great flow, great rhyme :) Hugs Eve
Green Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 9:17 AM
I loved the meter and the rhymes in this but most of all I loved the picture you painted with your words. What a beautiful scene I have jut walked through.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful! I especially love the last stanza...silver and white topaz, frozen bling! As always a pleasure, CayCay!
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:30 AM
magical, cay.... you got the spirit in its finest form.. congrats and huggs.. more soon; still having internet issues..
White Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 4:48 AM
That last stanza is breathtaking, CayCay. I can see the magic of the fast disappearing winter jewellery everywhere in your poem. Congratulations :)
Daniel Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 2:53 AM
"Frozen bling of delight" - amazing:) congratulations on your wonderful win, CayCay:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:39 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem making the shortlist CayCay I'm very happy for you. : ) 7
Turner Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations on your win CayCay. I'll be glad when spring gets here. I miss the colors:(
Burch Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:23 PM
"Jewels from silver and White topaz storms" ...wonderful!! Well done my friend!! congratulations on your win!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Caycay, I am so happy to see you with this win. This is indeed a magical winter poem!! Miss you, my friend!!! I got home Sunday and will really miss my lazy vacation time!!!
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 4:37 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your fine win! Such beautiful imagery! Hugs, Sandra
Pett Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations Caycay, love this poem a joy to read.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 3:44 PM
oh so beautiful Caycay and well done for being on the winners list!:-) hugs Jan xx
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