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Winter Magic - 8-12 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 01/13/2024

Shrunken by the cold weather, winter magic gathers us together. Shivering as naked trees, we travel across the seas. We join our effort to see magic under our knees. We pray to reach home, our heart is not alone. A magic winter delights us on its own. A magic winter provide us with fulness, despite of its dulness. Under the grey skies we feel small. Quietly at night, the waves heat fast our boat. Trying to sleep, we wait for the marmaid calls. The magic of another winter, embraces us with our recalls.

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Date: 1/15/2024 6:12:00 AM
Maria, beautiful winter scenes on the sea, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/15/2024 6:46:00 AM
Ahh! Thank you so much Tania. Have a lovely day!
Date: 1/13/2024 12:48:00 PM
- Both people and trees are shivering in the cold winter ... great written, Maria :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/13/2024 12:59:00 PM
I hope the magic winter up there embrace you with a magic touch, at least with health my dear Anne. I love snow, difficoult to see here nowadays, but at the same time our body it's not accustomed to it. Anyway, thank you so much my friend. Hugsxxx

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