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Winter Magic

I beheld amidst the baleful sky, a single snowflake falling gently startling white against the slaty gray. The crystal alit with cushioned sigh upon your lips and sat contently; you, too cold for it to melt away. Rested long upon that ruby scar did that winter's magic falling star.

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Date: 1/15/2024 6:21:00 AM
Terry, a sweet and magical winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/23/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Tania, and for hosting the contest, I love entering them always a challenge!
Date: 1/11/2024 12:14:00 PM
Your "Winter Magic" is a wonderful write/rhyme. Have Blessed day writing away.......................
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/23/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 1/9/2024 4:31:00 PM
Now this is beautiful and is making me want to host contests again.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/10/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Rob, such a kind comment.

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