Winter Magic

I beheld amidst the baleful sky,
a single snowflake falling gently
startling white against the slaty gray.

The crystal alit with cushioned sigh
upon your lips and sat contently;
you, too cold for it to melt away.

Rested long upon that ruby scar
did that winter's magic falling star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Terry, a sweet and magical winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Miller Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Tania, and for hosting the contest, I love entering them always a challenge!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 12:14 PM
Your "Winter Magic" is a wonderful write/rhyme. Have Blessed day writing away.......................
Miller Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Paula.
Carmack Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Now this is beautiful and is making me want to host contests again.
Miller Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Thank you so much Rob, such a kind comment.
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