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Winter Love

Winter Love-
So sweet and warm then
leaves you cold.

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Placed 8th in "Get Romantic" Contest. XD

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/14/2015 10:57:00 AM

I had to read this again to fully absorb the beauty of your lines. Your words are smooth and mental friendly. My innerself jerk to your written expressions and I just cannot stop loving this beautiful page. Definitely a 7

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:54:00 PM

haha ain't that the truth, I like it! grats on your win

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/11/2015 7:17:00 PM

I honestly wouldn't know, but I am glad you enjpyed it! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 1:17:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work!! Enjoyed readingtoday...Sara

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/9/2015 7:20:00 PM

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:23:00 PM

HI AMELIA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/9/2015 1:02:00 AM

Hi Skat! Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:53:00 AM

Amelia, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/9/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thank you X) Always interesting to write something other than free verse, and usually more than a little scary for the people reading it. I)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 7:45:00 PM

A bittersweet romance...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/8/2015 3:41:00 AM

Completely imaginary, too. Thank you! X)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:09:00 PM

congrats on your win Amelia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/7/2015 5:04:00 PM

Thank you!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 6:27:00 AM

a cute sweet poem Amelia. Lovely. Congrats on win...rajat

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/7/2015 5:04:00 PM

Thank you! XD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:26:00 AM

oops you don't have soupmail. I had a suggestion that would have made this poem rate higher with me. I will just tell you right here then. It is not good to use a word like "then" at the end of a line in a haiku. here is one idea that I think would have sounded a bit better; winter love/ though sweet and warm/ it leaves you cold Also you had capitalized two of the words and the rules said not to. This one could have scored higher. I just wanted to tell you why it didn't.

Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/7/2015 4:26:00 AM

Ok. Thank you! I don't write a lot of haiku, many formatted poems, so this was a challenge. XD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:23:00 AM

Amelia. this was very nice. Congrats in my contest. Soupmail.

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