Winter Leaves

Silver glistening on clear water

Trickling babbling brook carries leaves down stream

Water defrosts as the seasons change
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 10, 2008 at 11:58 AM
Nice use of imagery and personification in this poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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December 10, 2008 at 6:42 AM
From winter to spring? A new beginning~A new life~A new hope? What a pretty picture you painted here dear lady~So lovely, peaceful and gentle~A reflection I believe, of true the wonderful beauty which is truly inside of "'You'~Beautiful Julie Cottingham!"~I must be leaving shortly, but "You Know!," that I shall return to "You" soon!~Until then dear, "Have A Beautiful Day~My Love Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays Love~Bye!:)
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