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Winter Leave Me Be

Oh, bleak winter leave me be I cherish not your calling, I begged you not visit me As temperatures were falling. For I cleave unto the Sun, And its welcome, warming rays Not the late months of the year With their short and dismal days. But that I could hibernate To awaken when it's warm, But no, I woke up shivering On this cold, and frosty morn. Entry for STANDARD CONTEST 155,any form,anytheme, Up to a max of 20 lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 3/1/19. Placed= 1st.

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Date: 1/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win,Gary-- my old bones too want to 'cleave unto the sun--- great line, that!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/12/2019 8:40:00 AM
Thank you L.J. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 10:33:00 AM
We can all relate, Gary. Congrats on your top win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2019 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 1/4/2019 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/4/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. :)
Date: 1/4/2019 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Gary. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/4/2019 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Eve, and happy new year to you. :)
Date: 1/4/2019 8:39:00 AM
If only my feet would stay warm! Yes, where is the sun! Enjoyed! Congratulations!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/4/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 1/3/2019 7:03:00 PM
I fight hibernation just to get anything done; freeze all of the time. I think that we've had sun here once this week.
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Date: 1/3/2019 7:07:00 PM
Freezing here M.L. :)
Date: 1/3/2019 4:52:00 PM
I can relate to every line and wish I could hibernate until spring Gary. Beautifully penned, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/3/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan. :)

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