Winter Jewels

Raindrops on branches
That twinkle in the morning,
Winter's silver jewels.

   "This is for Winter"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rutherford Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Excellent Haiku Rauwoifia ,A long time since I've heard from you.Hope you are well. Hugs Anne
Brumley Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Sweetheart, did you intend to spell jewels 'jewls'?
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:54 AM
A nice haiku on nature. Good luck if it is for the contest
Tideswell Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:32 AM
Nice haiku, nice image. Just one typo - twinkle - also strictly speaking jew'ls needs the apostrophe, (but artistically maybe it's better without?) Either way, your haiku is lovely ~ Sharon :)
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